June 18Jun 18 #578 Link to comment https://community.webinsiders.com/topic/155-how-do-you-write-a-sales-page-that-does-not-feel-manipulative/ Share on other sites Share on Facebook {lang="reddit_text" Share on LinkedIn Share on Pinterest Share on X More sharing options... I am launching a course and I need a sales page. Every template I find feels like a formula for manipulation. Urgency timers, scarcity claims, pain agitation. I want people to buy but I do not want to feel gross about how I got them there. Is there an honest way to sell?
June 18Jun 18 #668 Link to comment https://community.webinsiders.com/topic/155-how-do-you-write-a-sales-page-that-does-not-feel-manipulative/#findComment-668 Share on other sites Share on Facebook {lang="reddit_text" Share on LinkedIn Share on Pinterest Share on X More sharing options... Manipulation is promising what you cannot deliver. Urgency and scarcity are not inherently evil. They are tools. The problem is fake urgency. If your course actually closes enrollment, say so. If it does not, do not pretend. Truth is rare. It sells.
June 18Jun 18 #669 Link to comment https://community.webinsiders.com/topic/155-how-do-you-write-a-sales-page-that-does-not-feel-manipulative/#findComment-669 Share on other sites Share on Facebook {lang="reddit_text" Share on LinkedIn Share on Pinterest Share on X More sharing options... I include a section on who this is not for. I actively disqualify people. It builds trust with the right buyers and reduces refunds. A sales page that filters out bad fits is more valuable than one that converts everyone.
June 18Jun 18 #670 Link to comment https://community.webinsiders.com/topic/155-how-do-you-write-a-sales-page-that-does-not-feel-manipulative/#findComment-670 Share on other sites Share on Facebook {lang="reddit_text" Share on LinkedIn Share on Pinterest Share on X More sharing options... I write the page as a letter to my past self. What did I need to hear before I bought this? What objections did I have? What would have convinced me? If you are selling something you believe in, honesty is the most persuasive tactic.
June 18Jun 18 #672 Link to comment https://community.webinsiders.com/topic/155-how-do-you-write-a-sales-page-that-does-not-feel-manipulative/#findComment-672 Share on other sites Share on Facebook {lang="reddit_text" Share on LinkedIn Share on Pinterest Share on X More sharing options... I record myself explaining the course to a friend and transcribe it. My natural enthusiasm and specific details come through. When I try to write marketing copy, I sound like everyone else. When I transcribe real conversation, I sound like me.
Monday at 07:29 AM2 days #1443 Link to comment https://community.webinsiders.com/topic/155-how-do-you-write-a-sales-page-that-does-not-feel-manipulative/#findComment-1443 Share on other sites Share on Facebook {lang="reddit_text" Share on LinkedIn Share on Pinterest Share on X More sharing options... I write it as a letter to my past self. What did I need to hear? What objections did I have? Honesty is the most persuasive tactic if you actually believe in what you're selling.
Monday at 10:05 AM2 days #1455 Link to comment https://community.webinsiders.com/topic/155-how-do-you-write-a-sales-page-that-does-not-feel-manipulative/#findComment-1455 Share on other sites Share on Facebook {lang="reddit_text" Share on LinkedIn Share on Pinterest Share on X More sharing options... I include who the product is not for. Actively disqualify people. It builds trust with the right buyers and reduces refunds.
Monday at 06:32 PM2 days #1528 Link to comment https://community.webinsiders.com/topic/155-how-do-you-write-a-sales-page-that-does-not-feel-manipulative/#findComment-1528 Share on other sites Share on Facebook {lang="reddit_text" Share on LinkedIn Share on Pinterest Share on X More sharing options... I recorded myself explaining the offer to a friend and transcribed it. My natural enthusiasm came through. When I try to write marketing copy, I sound like everyone else.
Monday at 09:54 PM2 days #1567 Link to comment https://community.webinsiders.com/topic/155-how-do-you-write-a-sales-page-that-does-not-feel-manipulative/#findComment-1567 Share on other sites Share on Facebook {lang="reddit_text" Share on LinkedIn Share on Pinterest Share on X More sharing options... I used fake urgency once and felt gross for weeks. Now if there's no real deadline, I don't invent one. Truth is rare enough that it stands out.
Tuesday at 03:08 AM2 days #1601 Link to comment https://community.webinsiders.com/topic/155-how-do-you-write-a-sales-page-that-does-not-feel-manipulative/#findComment-1601 Share on other sites Share on Facebook {lang="reddit_text" Share on LinkedIn Share on Pinterest Share on X More sharing options... The best sales page I ever wrote had a section called Why you shouldn't buy this. Converted at 12%. Counterintuitive honesty works.
Yesterday at 01:27 AM1 day #1757 Link to comment https://community.webinsiders.com/topic/155-how-do-you-write-a-sales-page-that-does-not-feel-manipulative/#findComment-1757 Share on other sites Share on Facebook {lang="reddit_text" Share on LinkedIn Share on Pinterest Share on X More sharing options... i write the page, then remove every sentence that makes me cringe. usually that's 40% of the draft. what's left is honest and still converts.
21 hours ago21 hr #1784 Link to comment https://community.webinsiders.com/topic/155-how-do-you-write-a-sales-page-that-does-not-feel-manipulative/#findComment-1784 Share on other sites Share on Facebook {lang="reddit_text" Share on LinkedIn Share on Pinterest Share on X More sharing options... include a "who this is not for" section. actively disqualify people. builds trust with the right buyers and reduces refunds. counterintuitive but effective.
17 hours ago17 hr #1798 Link to comment https://community.webinsiders.com/topic/155-how-do-you-write-a-sales-page-that-does-not-feel-manipulative/#findComment-1798 Share on other sites Share on Facebook {lang="reddit_text" Share on LinkedIn Share on Pinterest Share on X More sharing options... tell the story of why i created the offer. the origin story. people buy from humans, not faceless companies. vulnerability is a differentiator.
13 hours ago13 hr #1817 Link to comment https://community.webinsiders.com/topic/155-how-do-you-write-a-sales-page-that-does-not-feel-manipulative/#findComment-1817 Share on other sites Share on Facebook {lang="reddit_text" Share on LinkedIn Share on Pinterest Share on X More sharing options... I record myself explaining the offer to a skeptical friend. then transcribe and edit. if i can convince my cynical friend, i can convince anyone.
7 hours ago7 hr #1842 Link to comment https://community.webinsiders.com/topic/155-how-do-you-write-a-sales-page-that-does-not-feel-manipulative/#findComment-1842 Share on other sites Share on Facebook {lang="reddit_text" Share on LinkedIn Share on Pinterest Share on X More sharing options... Removed all countdown timers and scarcity tactics. replaced with "enrollment closes on this date because i need time to prepare." honest urgency converts better than fake urgency.
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